Merge branch 'MDL-55002-30-enfix' of git://github.com/mudrd8mz/moodle into MOODLE_30_STABLE

lang/en/backup.php

@@ -76,11 +76,11 @@ $string['backuptypesection'] = 'Section';
 $string['backupversion'] = 'Backup version';
 $string['cannotfindassignablerole'] = 'The {$a} role in the backup file cannot be mapped to any of the roles that you are allowed to assign.';
 $string['choosefilefromcoursebackup'] = 'Course backup area';
-$string['choosefilefromcoursebackup_help'] = 'When backup courses using default settings, backup files will be stored here';
+$string['choosefilefromcoursebackup_help'] = 'Course backups made using default settings are stored here.';
 $string['choosefilefromuserbackup'] = 'User private backup area';
-$string['choosefilefromuserbackup_help'] = 'When backup courses with "Anonymize user information" option ticked, backup files will be stored here';
+$string['choosefilefromuserbackup_help'] = 'Backup files with anonymized user information are stored here.';
 $string['choosefilefromactivitybackup'] = 'Activity backup area';
-$string['choosefilefromactivitybackup_help'] = 'When backup activities using default settings, backup files will be stored here';
+$string['choosefilefromactivitybackup_help'] = 'Activity backups made using default settings are stored here.';
 $string['choosefilefromautomatedbackup'] = 'Automated backups';
 $string['choosefilefromautomatedbackup_help'] = 'Contains automatically generated backups.';
 $string['configgeneralactivities'] = 'Sets the default for including activities in a backup.';
@@ -130,9 +130,9 @@ $string['filealiasesrestorefailures_help'] = 'Aliases are symbolic links to othe
 
 More details and the actual reason of the failure can be found in the restore log file.';
 $string['filealiasesrestorefailures_link'] = 'restore/filealiases';
-$string['filereferencesincluded'] = 'File references to external contents included in backup package, they won\'t work on other sites.';
-$string['filereferencessamesite'] = 'Backup is from the same site, file references can be restored';
-$string['filereferencesnotsamesite'] = 'Backup is from other site, file references cannot be restored';
+$string['filereferencesincluded'] = 'File references to external contents are included in the backup file. These won\'t work if the backup is restored on a different site.';
+$string['filereferencessamesite'] = 'The backup file is from this site, and so file references can be restored.';
+$string['filereferencesnotsamesite'] = 'The backup file is from a different site, and so file references cannot be restored.';
 $string['generalactivities'] = 'Include activities and resources';
 $string['generalanonymize'] = 'Anonymise information';
 $string['generalbackdefaults'] = 'General backup defaults';
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ $string['lockedbyconfig'] = 'This setting has been locked by the default backup
 $string['lockedbyhierarchy'] = 'Locked by dependencies';
 $string['loglifetime'] = 'Keep logs for';
 $string['managefiles'] = 'Manage backup files';
-$string['missingfilesinpool'] = 'Some files could not be saved during the backup, it won\'t be possible to restore them.';
+$string['missingfilesinpool'] = 'Some files could not be saved during the backup, and so it will not be possible to restore them.';
 $string['moodleversion'] = 'Moodle version';
 $string['moreresults'] = 'There are too many results, enter a more specific search.';
 $string['nomatchingcourses'] = 'There are no courses to display';

lang/en/badges.php

@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ $string['backpackdetails'] = 'Backpack settings';
 $string['backpackemail'] = 'Email address';
 $string['backpackemail_help'] = 'The email address associated with your backpack. While you are connected, any badges earned on this site will be associated with this email address.';
 $string['personaconnection'] = 'Sign in with your email';
-$string['personaconnection_help'] = 'Persona is a system for identifying yourself across the web, using an email address that you own. The Open Badges backpack uses Persona as a login system, so to be able to connect to a backpack you with need a Persona account.
+$string['personaconnection_help'] = 'Persona is a system for identifying yourself across the web, using an email address that you own. The Open Badges backpack uses Persona as a login system, so to be able to connect to a backpack you will need a Persona account.
 
 For more information about Persona visit <a href="https://login.persona.org/about">https://login.persona.org/about</a>.';
 $string['backpackimport'] = 'Badge import settings';

lang/en/question.php

@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ $string['categorycurrent'] = 'Current category';
 $string['categorycurrentuse'] = 'Use this category';
 $string['categorydoesnotexist'] = 'This category does not exist';
 $string['categoryinfo'] = 'Category info';
-$string['categorymove'] = 'The category \'{$a->name}\' contains {$a->count} questions (some of them may be old, hidden, questions, or Random questions that are still in use in some existing quizzes). Please choose another category to move them to.';
+$string['categorymove'] = 'The category \'{$a->name}\' contains {$a->count} questions (some of which may be hidden questions or random questions that are still in use in a quiz). Please choose another category to move them to.';
 $string['categorymoveto'] = 'Save in category';
 $string['categorynamecantbeblank'] = 'The category name cannot be blank.';
 $string['clickflag'] = 'Flag question';

mod/forum/lang/en/forum.php

@@ -497,11 +497,11 @@ $string['trackingoff'] = 'Off';
 $string['trackingon'] = 'Forced';
 $string['trackingoptional'] = 'Optional';
 $string['trackingtype'] = 'Read tracking';
-$string['trackingtype_help'] = 'If enabled, participants can track read and unread posts in the forum and in discussions. There are three options:
+$string['trackingtype_help'] = 'Read tracking enables participants to easily check which posts they have not yet seen by highlighting any new posts.
 
-* Optional - Participants can choose whether to turn tracking on or off via a link in the administration block. Forum tracking must also be enabled in the user\'s profile settings.
-* Forced - Tracking is always on, regardless of user setting. Available depending on administrative setting.
-* Off - Read and unread posts are not tracked.';
+If set to optional, participants can choose whether to turn tracking on or off via a link in the administration block. (Users must also enable forum tracking in their forum preferences.)
+
+If \'Allow forced read tracking\' is enabled in the site administration, then a further option is available - forced. This means that tracking is always on, regardless of users\' forum preferences.';
 $string['unread'] = 'Unread';
 $string['unreadposts'] = 'Unread posts';
 $string['unreadpostsnumber'] = '{$a} unread posts';