From c9e526a4e79a0fc43fa63e2a0ddbd949b8af9094 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sara Arjona <sara@moodle.com>
Date: Thu, 9 May 2019 13:56:58 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] MDL-65518 badges: some language improvements

Helen has suggested some wording changes to make easier to understand
some of the backpack settings.

Thanks a lot Helen!! :-)
---
 lang/en/badges.php | 8 +++-----
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/lang/en/badges.php b/lang/en/badges.php
index 6d58937ba54..abb06421b73 100644
--- a/lang/en/badges.php
+++ b/lang/en/badges.php
@@ -58,10 +58,8 @@ $string['allmethodmanual'] = 'All of the selected roles award the badge';
 $string['allmethodprofile'] = 'All of the selected profile fields have been completed';
 $string['allowcoursebadges'] = 'Enable course badges';
 $string['allowcoursebadges_desc'] = 'Allow badges to be created and awarded in the course context.';
-$string['allowexternalbackpack'] = 'Enable connection to external backpacks';
-$string['allowexternalbackpack_desc'] = 'Allow users to set up connections and display badges from their external backpack providers.
-
-Note: It is recommended to leave this option disabled if the website cannot be accessed from the Internet (e.g. because of the firewall).';
+$string['allowexternalbackpack'] = 'External backpack connection';
+$string['allowexternalbackpack_desc'] = 'If enabled, users can connect to an external backpack and share their badges from this site. Users may also choose to display any public badge collections from their external backpack on their profile page on this site. It is recommended to leave this option disabled if your site is not accessible from the Internet.';
 $string['any'] = 'Any';
 $string['anymethod'] = 'Any of the selected conditions is met';
 $string['anymethodactivity'] = 'Any of the selected activities is complete';
@@ -503,7 +501,7 @@ $string['selectgroup_start'] = 'Select collections from your backpack to display
 $string['selecting'] = 'With selected badges...';
 $string['setup'] = 'Set up connection';
 $string['sitebackpack'] = 'Active external backpack';
-$string['sitebackpack_help'] = 'An external backpack allows users to share their badges. Only one external backpack can be active for the site. Changing this setting after users have connected their backpacks will require each user to disconnect and reconnect from their backpack settings page.';
+$string['sitebackpack_help'] = 'The external backpack that users can connect to from this site. Note that changing this setting after users have connected their backpacks will require each user to go to their backpack settings page and disconnect then reconnect.';
 $string['sitebackpackverify'] = 'Backpack connection';
 $string['sitebackpackwarning'] = 'Could not connect to backpack. <br/><br/>Check that the "Badge issuer email address" admin setting is the valid email for an account on the backpack website. <br/><br/>Check that the "Badge issuer password" on the <a href="{$a->url}">site backpack settings page</a>, is the correct password for the account on the backpack website. <br/><br/>The backpack returned: "{$a->warning}"';
 $string['sitebadges'] = 'Site badges';